Response to feedback

We felt that the feedback was fair and it informed us of various issues that need to be rectified in the up coming weeks. We agree and thank P1 02 for being nice about our piece and we agree that we need a soundtrack. This would add tension and pace to the scene.

In light of some negative feedback we (2 group members) have decided that we need to film some extra shots some time next week to add pace and make our thriller the best it possibly can be. With sound I think we would have had more positive feedback from the other groups and the hand washing scene would become less repetitive. If we do all of this to our piece it should become top notch like some of the other we viewed today.

Our logo

We have found this logo that previously we have forgotten to add up.

Our plan to meet the shooting deadline

• Due to College being closed on Wednesday we cannot gather our group together to film the shots we planned.
• So now our plan is to book a camera for Thursday at the start of lunch or Friday from 2:40 onwards.
• We will film all of our remaining shots with the experience we have from our Children's film project and the test shots we have done throughout our thriller project.
• We will edit our final piece with detail but at the same time quickly and efficiently. The shooting deadline is Monday this means we will still have time to edit throughout the week and make the sequence the best it can possibly be.
• We are also going to make a soundtrack next which will fit in the with the overall theme of our sequence.
  

Test footage

This is some test footage that Ollie filmed with the camera. The two shots filmed are the same sort of shots that we are going to use in our final piece. We may also have to use these two shots in the final sequence if we do not have enough time to film them again.